Perfect 🙌 glad you liked the rewrite breakdown!
For your Discover Los Angeles page, I’d suggest doing both versions:
Quick-scroll caption (short, emotional, viral-friendly) → grabs attention fast, works with an image/video.
News-style post (longer with subheadings) → for people who want the full context, keeps your page looking authoritative.
That way you cover both audiences: the ones who scroll fast and the ones who stay to read.
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